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Sorry it's long. It's 19 pages, or 18 pages and a paragraph to be exact.
This is the beginning of the story formerly known as "For Love". I changed the title to "Let's love partially because while I was learning Korean, I kept saying "Sarang Haja"... So... yeah... lol. I also changed some of the relationships between the characters. I thought it was a bit sad killing off a few characters before giving them a real chance to live in the story so I decided to change it up from the original story. However, somethings from the original story stayed.
If you like, you can compare the Original Storyline with this one.
Hope you enjoy it. I've been revising chapter one so it will be posted soon.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me what you think. And be brutally honest (but not mean), I can take criticism.
This is the beginning of the story formerly known as "For Love". I changed the title to "Let's love partially because while I was learning Korean, I kept saying "Sarang Haja"... So... yeah... lol. I also changed some of the relationships between the characters. I thought it was a bit sad killing off a few characters before giving them a real chance to live in the story so I decided to change it up from the original story. However, somethings from the original story stayed.
If you like, you can compare the Original Storyline with this one.
Hope you enjoy it. I've been revising chapter one so it will be posted soon.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me what you think. And be brutally honest (but not mean), I can take criticism.
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Trust No One!
I love how you put a modern twist on this! I watch a lot of dramas from different cultures and the fall of hierarchy is usually from the ones they trust the most. I'm glad I'm not royalty!
That conniving Charles! Trying to pacify his guilt by blaming Brain for not dying with his mother. I'm intrigued! I would to see more!![Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-04 (Heart Dance) [V1]](https://orig01.deviantart.net/a21d/f/2014/171/c/b/hamtaro_mouse_emoji_04__heart_dance___v1__by_jerikuto-d7n4wio.gif)
I love how you put a modern twist on this! I watch a lot of dramas from different cultures and the fall of hierarchy is usually from the ones they trust the most. I'm glad I'm not royalty! That conniving Charles! Trying to pacify his guilt by blaming Brain for not dying with his mother. I'm intrigued! I would to see more!