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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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first off, I get the impression this is a 15 year old kid. is he supposed to be a teenager? cuz I thought he was supposed to be older
then next his eyes aren't looking in the same direction. what I always do is, I cover up one eye and look where the other one is looking, to see if they're both looking the same way. his left eye (on our right) is looking far more to the right than his right eye.
and lastly his neck is crooked. the left line is going inwards, while the right line, is going more or less straight down. since it's anime style, his neck doesn't need to be any thicker, but I would make both lines straight (kind of like you drew allison's neck).
other than that his face looks good (myeah his cheeks aren't exactly mirrored but I don't think that's all too important). I like how you drew his mouth and I think the eyes themselves look okay (just they're not looking in the same direction
as for my rating: vision I just filled something in, cuz there's no vision here, it's just a sketch
originality: his face isn't too different from the average anime male, but like I said, very happy to see he has a chin! for some reason most people (including professional/published anime artists!) give all their anime characters the same pointy chin
technique is good, but there are a few minor flaws (but I know you can draw him without those flaws) AND it's a sketch, which means it's unfinished. I don't like sketches lol
impact is low, because like I said there are some issues with the sketch. if you fix his hair, eyes and neck, he'll leave a much better impact!
myes so I'm looking forward to seeing him coloured!
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